Unofficial Rulebook Feedback

[hrcho]

I went through the Unofficial Rulebook (though not very thoroughly) and I found it very nicely done. As far as the contents of change are concerned, I think that all clarification is very nicely done and clarifying enough .

I would like to point a few things about the aesthetics of it. 

 I don't really like the color of added clarification. I'm not usually the one to complain about such things, but I think the color is too strong. While I was reading through the rulebook, each time I saw the red color, I'd skip whatever I was reading to read that. I think it should be a weaker color so it doesn't leap out, but strong enough to point out that this as an added clarification.

The only other thing I found worth noticing is ? unless strength is tripled part of the rulebook. Just the title could be moved to be above the rest of the text, because its current place confused me a bit at first look. Especially since it's red.

I'll give it another look, but I think it's good. Very good.

to Tbiesty

[Tbiesty]

Thanks for taking a look at it.  I've made the updates based on your comments.  Here's the link again: "Unofficial Rulebook"